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November 19, 2001
Cloud by sumalangitnawa describes true friendship with grace, elegance and short form. In a very simple style sumalangitnawa proves what Shakespeare said “Brevity is the soul of wit”. Please read this unique and intelligent poem. Selected by `faithwalker.
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a cloud
is soft
with vapor whisper
i spat
at it
but it fell
right back
on my
face
i rub
my eye
cry
the cloud
washed
my tears
with its
own

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cloud
nob 17 2001
SLN
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it's about friendship

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