Dusty

of your latest bulk-submission of poetry, i was not quite sure which one was my favourite. some of the submissions i didn't like at all for no particular reason besides my being not able to relate to them, so maybe it was rather them disliking me. who knows.

anyway, at first i thought "sense" was my favourite, because it was minimalistic and seemed very true, but then i read about truths in "bloated expressions", so i let go of "sense", and now i really believe that this, "dusty", is what likes me most.

it's not as minimal, but in another way much smaller and more to another point.

christ, i'm loosing this one.

Lazarus Amen