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denselyDENSELYpopulatedOVER.HEREislands f l o a t i n g
seeking the pacific's navel
(right there in the middle)
foreststaxisconcreteFIGHTINGroadsestuariesparksFORlandfillscommercelivingSPACEexoticmundaneunusual
a balloon humanity inflates changing
packing rocking mocking the boat
chopping pulping timidly burning
the wood that keeps it afloat
sodenseheretheforests so to be seen the trees stand tall
sonoisyherethecities so to be heard they can't merely call
butSHOUTohyesSHOUTonly
andCRYohyesCRYsoftly
as
we
s l o w l y
sink
to
the
floor
of
the
sea
seeking the pacific's navel
(right there in the middle)
foreststaxisconcreteFIGHTINGroadsestuariesparksFORlandfillscommercelivingSPACEexoticmundaneunusual
a balloon humanity inflates changing
packing rocking mocking the boat
chopping pulping timidly burning
the wood that keeps it afloat
sodenseheretheforests so to be seen the trees stand tall
sonoisyherethecities so to be heard they can't merely call
butSHOUTohyesSHOUTonly
andCRYohyesCRYsoftly
as
we
s l o w l y
sink
to
the
floor
of
the
sea
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the first time southeast asia went out into the WWW, she was covered in froth and foam of words, garbled up see weeds of carelessness, false hopes of slick formatting and color, a delusion of HTML dreams.
here she is again. Sorry about that.
SLN
the first time southeast asia went out into the WWW, she was covered in froth and foam of words, garbled up see weeds of carelessness, false hopes of slick formatting and color, a delusion of HTML dreams.
here she is again. Sorry about that.
SLN
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A wormwood dream,
seeps slowly into me,
through the concrete.
(Skip to reality)
I drop a b
---------e
----------a
-----------t
and sink s-l-o-w-l-y
Into your sea.
Wonderful words, i love the rhythem and beat. It flows nicely and the structure and theme You used are ones that can draw in both the average and expert reader. i love that in a poem. Keep up the great work!
--kabookie
Riding a Phantom Lullaby
seeps slowly into me,
through the concrete.
(Skip to reality)
I drop a b
---------e
----------a
-----------t
and sink s-l-o-w-l-y
Into your sea.
Wonderful words, i love the rhythem and beat. It flows nicely and the structure and theme You used are ones that can draw in both the average and expert reader. i love that in a poem. Keep up the great work!
--kabookie
Riding a Phantom Lullaby