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the foreign guy

lifting a severed look of loss
from his heavy head
with his heavy hands
he then parts the locks
of his oddly colored hair

within woven words
unknown to him
[their textures thick
their meanings thin]
he embeds his life
and jams the loom

he speaks an alien silence
and with a vision stained
by clays of a distant lake
pours a breath of why
into folds withdrawn, unnoticed

okt 24, 2001
i was in the library when i wrote this. right before falling asleep.

what makes anyone foreign?
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ciudadlejana Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2002

what is it with the foreign guy that always draws my attention -- they have a foreign look that makes you look twice at them, not a lost look, more like a 'you found me' look

Reality is a constant source of pain -- Anas Nin
skyOrange Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2001

what noize said.

+ this: when you don't belong, look alike and speak like the others. yup.

and i know that wasn't a question but an introduction to your poem. wala lang akong masabi kasi nasabi na lahat ni ingayz.

ramdom Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2001
~ "what makes anyone foreign?" - not being at home i believe. home being another heart, a place, a country or a state of mind. sometimes i think the insane are foreign to themselves - lost they know not where: some uncharted territory deep inside the land of their soul - did i just say this?

no, i believe you did. much more eloquently.
noize Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2001
embeds his foreign guy him pours a breath of arts from his a hair he then a vision oddly colored loss from his... the severed look of textures thick loss severed lifting heavy words unknown to the loom is oddly colored of their meanings thin] by clays withdrawn, unnoticed hair into folds withdrawn, to and with breath of why he embeds his life and parts look of the lifting guy of foreign locks a vision stained with words unknown
jibrille Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2001   Interface Designer
Mmm.. Very nice, I really like the way it flows.. Simply wonderful.. The idea is so original and unqiue..


Paint it Black.
locussolus Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2001
what makes anyone foriegn... arent we all, in relation to eachother, in a way? and that silence, where we become foreign to ourselves...

sharp words. alot of meaning hidden in that portrait. but it took me a few readings to uncover it.
meglocrush Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2001
this flows really well.

how could you fall asleep in the library. its such an exciting place.

(im not as eem as you think i am)
mastermindg Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2001
ooh, i like the rymin... and i love the lines
within woven words
unknown to him
[their textures thick
their meanings thin]

really great, awesome message in that. nice =D (Big Grin)

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